Teacher Feedback

The shot list is looking good, I think the way you have segmented it by sections of the song is a good idea.
Ensure that you also have some feedback from your pitch, write a blog entry that reflects how it went and any comments, questions or feedback you received.
Also try to include lots of images and other videos to begin to build up a picture of the mise en scene you are trying to create.
The blog is looking good so far, keep on with the good work.