FEEDBACK FROM ROUGHCUT

WHAT OTHER PEOPLE SAID ABOUT OUR ROUGHCUT :)

Camera work-
*good variety of shots, some shots a bit to long but we understnd you are in the editing process
*varied shot types, close up very good.

Editing-
*Good clear cuts, bit faster and smoother will improve it
-good lip syncing
-black and white effect used well
-great idea to have flash backs and the flases back to the girl singing

Effects-
Good use of black and white used to represent the past
-flashbacks used well to give more depth while long opening

Mise en scene-
-good, fits well with the genre and style of song
-good choice of costumes matches the theme well
-good use of colours of clothing for girl eg white for present and black for the past

Performance/Genre
*well acted out, stayed in roll well, made it beliveable
-made it fir genre

Continuity
-very good, looked good throughout
-Can see camera in door knob
-Depressing - *cry* *waaa*
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Overall comments
-good video, will be better once editing is compleeted, good stuff!